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NEAT 2nd Level ― Short Essay Writing

The following chart shows the advantages and disadvantages of having many national holidays. After choosing a side, write an introduction and come up with a third reason. Then, write about all three reasons and make a conclusion. (80-120 words)

Advantages

- people can be proud of the holiday
- give people time to relax
- _________________________

Disadvantages

- make each holiday less important
- people will not focus on their work
- _______________________________

While some people think that having too many national holidays is bad, I believe that it has many advantages. First of all, this allows people to be proud of the holiday and their country. For example, when it is Buddha’s birthday, many Buddhists have lots of pride. Also, having lots of national holidays gives people time to relax. Especially in Korea people work very hard, so it’s good to have a rest. Finally, having national holidays gives people time to travel and experience new things. This will enable them to be smarter and worldlier. In conclusion, it is great for countries to have many national holidays.


While some people love having many national holidays, I believe that it has many disadvantages. First of all, this makes each holiday less important. That is because if you have too many of something, you will care less about each one. Also, if there are many national holidays, people won’t focus as much. The reason is that they are always taking breaks so they will lose track of their work or studies. Finally, having many national holidays can cause problems to many businesses. During holidays, the businesses have to close so they cannot make any money. In conclusion, it is bad for countries to have many national holidays.